2019-05-16 11:29 供稿單位: 新航道 原創作者:章躍
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The most important problems of our society can be solved during our lifetime.
Call me a pessimist. Personally, I think that few [否定在這里] of the majorstruggles or sufferings of human beings can be solved within my allotted time “我被分配的時間”，其實就是“自然給予我的生命時間”，就是“我的壽命”. Instead, I believe that those problems will persist regardless of our serious attempts to solve them and that they may seem to be solved but actually appear repeatedly with a deceptive new packaging yet unchanged nature. 套路深 之 “反問句”，是一種措辭技巧，“強詞奪理”給出觀點：Why do I hold such an upsetting 負評價詞暗示觀點 view?
The numerous times of disappointment in history have made a compelling case [make a case]. Many of the problems we are dealing with have long been difficulties since they first bothered us years or decades back. 然后舉例論證：For instance, people can still die young of illness. At this point, the opponents may find counterexamples that experts have been finding cures for more and more diseases that used to be lethal and are able to effectively intervene “（良性）干預”，是“正評價”詞 before the conditions take many lives. 轉折，拉回自己的立場：However, while increasing numbers of patients are cured, even moreunprecedented fatal viruses and pathological changes are also discovered. Theirrefutable fact, defeating, is that there will always be conditions that can take one’s life in the one’s prime.接下來，短句舒緩一下節奏： Another case is crime. 然后，筆者偏愛的措辭技巧: rhetorical question：Did it even stop for a while in the long history of humanity? In fact, not only does 注意此處的倒裝（注意學習此處倒裝的原則） it remain stubborn, it also varies. To name a few specific cases, fraud has always been a problem, and corruption has never been eliminated.
The other major reason is the intrinsic “內在的、固有的” flaws of humanity. It is fair to believe that many of our deficiencies “缺陷” can never be fixed, and as a result, the most important problems, 非限定從句舒緩一下語流：which are the result of those defects “（先天）缺陷”, can never be fixed. 前方高能句式：假設論證的排比用法，建議背誦 + 論證：假設法： If we humans were able to restrain our greed “抑制我們的貪婪”, there would be no more fraud or corruption. If we humans were able to quit our gluttony “戒除我們的暴食欲”, there may be reduced incidence of illness. If we humans were able to curb our temper“抑制我們的脾氣”, there would be less violence.Unfortunately, none [否定在這里] of the conditionals have ever been and could never be real cases, and consequently, few [否定在這里] of the many problems that we struggle with could be solved.
Admittedly, it is fair for any optimistic individual 注意接下來的不定式的平行現象 to stand opposite me, to rebut my idea and to argue otherwise. They may be seeing a small picture in which a number of specific problems are solved indeed and therefore seeing only the sunlight, however. I believe that I see the greater picture.